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Writing web pages is about being brief and to the point. People don't read web pages like they read printed pages, they scan them. You have to write your content to suit the way people read.

Effective writing is ...
... according to a study on How Users read on the Web by Jakob Nielsen:

  • objective - no biased statements as they reduce credibility
  • concise - cut out unecessary words
  • scannable - constructed in chunks and lists so the eye moves easily

Start with a conclusion
He also recommends an inverted pyramid style of writing, where you start with the main conclusion, and then broaden out to develop the story. This runs counter-intuitive to the way many of us have learned to write - the tendency is to start by explaining the context and assumptions, before opening up the area of study and analysing the material(s), before (at last!) pronouncing a conclusion.

Unfortunately, on the web peple will never get to your main point, so put it at the top.

A journalistic tip
Journalists often learn to include the six Ws in the first couple of lines of a story:
  What
  When
  Where
  Who
  Why
  hoW
Try it yourself - it encourages brief writing that gets straight to the point.

Active writing
Try to use an active style of writing rather than passive:
Jane was aked by Peter   Peter asked Jane
It cuts out words and the meaning flows in the same order as the words making it easier for users to digest your message.

Headings are important
Headings need to attract attention and clearly label the subject of the paragraph or section. Ambiguous headines might make for interesting writing, but are less suitable for the web than for a paper-based article.

Further resources

Web Editing: The Basics
An article from Writers Write, the Internet Writing Journal outlining key guidelines and a process to follow to help you write succinctly.
Write Right: writing for the web
A brief overview of approaches to writing to suit different purposes.
Hypertext Gardens
An essay on the nature of hypertext as a medium.
Web Writing that Works
A whole site dedicated to writing for the web. "To help you figure out what will work for you and your audiences when you start tapping out electronic text, we bring together the results of research on usability, readability, reading comprehension, and writing methods."
It's All in the Links: Readying Publications for the Web
Article on transforming documents for the web.
Plain English Campaign
How to write in plain English.
OWL (Online Writing Lab)
Conciseness: methods of eliminating wordiness.
Contentious
"The e-zine for people who create or publish content for online media"
Don't Forget to Write
"Graphics may get attention, but good writing rewards it."
The Beauty of Single-Column, Sequential Text
A voice against the mainstream espousing the value of leaving text unchunked.
Writing Effective and Eye Catching Headlines
Criteria for defining a "good" headline and a selection of attention grabbing words to use.
That Darned Content: Creating Logical Areas for Text
"Breaking content into pieces helps to make content easier to read for your visitors".
Amazon book list
A list of books on writing copy for the web that are available from Amazon.

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